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Short Story

The Night Train North

20 min read  •  November 2023  •  By Larkspur Words

Empty seats inside a vintage night train carriage

Ingrid had worked the night desk at Halden Junction for nine years, and she could tell the kind of night it would be by the 11:40. That Friday the 11:40 was twenty minutes late with one passenger still aboard: a girl of maybe nineteen, asleep against the window with a cello case across her knees.

“Last stop for the night,” Ingrid said, gently, the way you speak to deer. The girl woke all at once — the soldier's wakefulness of the young — and said, “I missed my connection, didn't I.” It wasn't a question.

The long platform

The next northbound train left at 5:12. Ingrid, against every regulation, unlocked the waiting room, made tea in the staff kitchen, and sat with the girl — Mira, conservatory-bound, carrying an audition in the cello case and a terror of missing it.

They talked the way strangers can at 2 a.m.: Ingrid about the husband who took the same line south and never wrote, Mira about the teacher who said her tone was “almost.” At 3:30 Mira opened the case and played — one suite, to an empty station, while snow began outside the tall windows.

“Almost, her teacher had said. Almost was a platform, not a verdict. You could board from almost.”

Ingrid wept quietly into her tea and was glad of the dark. When the 5:12 pulled in, on time for once, she pressed her mother's silver brooch into Mira's palm for luck. The girl hugged her — fierce, brief — and was gone up the steps with the cello.

Afterwards

Mira made the audition. Ingrid knows because a postcard arrived in June: three words — I got in — and a programme from a student recital, her name third on the list. It sits above the night desk now, where Ingrid can see it whenever the 11:40 runs late. Some nights, she swears she can still hear the suite in the rafters.

A cup of tea and a notebook on a wooden table by a window
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Larkspur Words writes short fiction about cities and the people awake in them. Her collection City of Small Hours was shortlisted for the Harbor Prize.

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